''Mining Strategy"(this song is called...)

Mining strategy

This is story of my freinds
I feels so bored
Till i got no friends
What to do
When there's a friend
No one know till i count to ten

All i've done i believe its right so go above to see
Rise your hands and standing tight
Dont expect me what to be

Would you got a knife and kill
All the exaggerations in my will
Dont know how
I feel it to
Dont you dare to have any clue.

All i've done i believe its right so go above to see
Rise your hands and standing tight
Dont expect me what to be

Written and composed by me and Ziman (2006)

Its our masterpiece, an unexpected tune blended with poetic words and moody mood that can make you wondering what the fish is the song about.haha.

"The song is about a boy,a lonely-not so lonely, who thinks he mustn't listen to others all the time,because others not really truly correct all the time. There are times that he should follow his own path, whenever he feels right to follow it. The relationship between him and friends very closed,and to be secure in a friendship,he always follows his friends ways...until one day he realizes that he should rise up and speak that he can stand alone without his friends"

Basically, i composed the tune and the chorus part only,then my rumate add more of his creativity to produce this great tune. Is it? its not finished yet,and we haven't played the song in studio, we've tried before,but it seems lack of catchiness.haha. Nevermind, we still working on it. After the song complete,i'll upload it here so you guys will get a chance to hear and make judgment or critics.